A serial writer’s notebook ~ from the pen behind Lore of the Underlings, an episodic epic…
Here are the opening couple of lines that I’ve written for my next ebook of the Lore, Episode 6 ~ Three Meetings. Do you find them appetizing? Do they make you hungry for more?
A sweet smoke of billit meat flavored the air from fire pits where a flock of folk, women all or their young girls, were roasting the fresh-killed fowl to a turn. “Good morning indeed!” it seemed to say.
This is going to be my longest and most ambitious episode yet. I’m about 20% into it now, so it’s going to take a while. But at least it’s off to a tasty start!
Do you have any favorite opening lines?